History of Karma/Talk

	Revision 7 . . October 31, 2001 12:56 am by Stephen Gilbert
	Revision 6 . . (edit) September 28, 2001 10:18 am by (logged).251.118.xxx

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Changed: 7c7

*Also* -- we need to phrase this in a neutral manner, not "X is", but "Some people think X is", or "X may be regarded as ..."

*Also* -- we need to phrase this in a neutral manner, not "X is", but "Some people think X is", or "X may be regarded as ..."

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Added: 11a11

I think the opening sentence puts karma in the context of Eastern religion; it's not necessary to pepper the entire article with "Some people think..." and "It is believed by some that...". Besides, that's just bad style. ;-) --STG